On Fri, Apr 04, 2014 at 12:21:47PM -0500, Jonathon Jongsma wrote: > Just a couple minor nitpicks below. Otherwise ACK. > > > 'accesss' has an extra 's'. Also, "allowing to access" sounds a bit > awkward. "allowing access to" might be a bit better? "It's" doesn't > need to be capitalized. The last sentence implies that eventually we > might be able to access remote vms over some other protocol ;) Suggest > the following: > > Spice-GTK is a library allowing access to remote displays over > the > SPICE protocol. At the moment It's mainly used to access remote > virtual machines. > Thanks, I've used your suggested wording. > > > + > > +The Spice-GTK library provides a set of command line options which > > +can be used to tweak how some SPICE-specific option. > > > The previous sentence seems unfinished. Extra 'how', I'll remove it. Thanks! Christophe
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