I have reviewed draft-drage-sipping-service-identification-02 Here are my comments -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Abstract This URN can be used to
identify services within the SIP header
fields defined in this document, and also within the framework
defined for caller preferences and callee capabilities in to identify
usage of both services and applications between end UAs. Proposed Rephrase This URN can be used within
the SIP header fields defined in this document to identify services, and
also within the framework defined for caller preferences and callee
capabilities to identify usage of both services and applications between end
UAs. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
P-Asserted-Service:
urn-xxx:exampletelephony.version1 Add
Note to RFC editor: replace xxx with the assigned 3 numeric digit Identifier -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 4.2. The
P-Preferred-Service Header The
P-Preferred-Service header field is used from a user agent to a trusted proxy
to carry the preferred service of the user sending the SIP request
that the user wishes to be used for the P-Asserted- Service field
value that the trusted element will insert. Proposed rewrite: The
P-Preferred-Service header field is used by a user agent sending the SIP
request to provide a hint to a trusted proxy of the preferred
service that the user wishes to be used for the P-Asserted- Service field
value that the trusted element will insert. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Propose add RFC 3840 4.3. Service and
Application Definition The service and
subservice identifiers identify the service as described in
Section 1. The URN may also be used to identify a service or an
application between end users for use within the context of RFC
3841 [RFC3841] **and RFC 3840 [RFC3840]**. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Update Registration
Information 4.4 Registration
Information: Registration version: 1; registration
date: 2007-04-21 -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 5.1.1 There is no text regarding the use
of the P-Asserted-Service header by UACs. A UAC within the trust
domain (such as a Media Gateway or Application Server) Can also include a
P-Asserted-Service header. This behavior should also be documented in 5.1.1 Proposed text A UAC that is within the
same trust domain as the proxy it sends a request to, (e.g a Media Gateway or
Application Server) MAY insert a P-Asserted-Service header in
a request that creates a dialog, or a request outside of a dialog. This
information MUST NOT conflict with other SIP or SDP information included
in the request. Furthermore, the SIP or SDP information needed to
signal functionality of this service MUST be present. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 5.1.2 There is no text regarding the use of the
P-Preferred-Service header by proxies. This needs to be added. Proposed text When a proxy receives a
request containing a P-Preferred-Service header the Proxy MAY use the contents
of that header to assist in determining the service to be included in a
P-Asserted-Service header field, (for instance to prioritize the order of comparison of
filter criteria for potential services that the request could match). The proxy MUST NOT
use the contents of the P-Preferred-Service header to identify the service without
first checking against the capabilities (e.g. SDP) contained in the request. If the proxy
inserts a P-Asserted-Service header in the request the proxy MUST remove the
P-Preferred-Service header before forwarding the request, otherwise the Proxy SHOULD include the
P-Preferred-Service header when forwarding the request. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 6 Examples The text in 6 seems to originate from RFC 3325 and not
modified as it seems to relate to P-Asserted-Identity and not
P-Asserted-Service In this
example, proxy.example.com creates a P-Asserted-Service header field
from the user identity it discovered from SIP Digest authentication,
and the list of services appropriate to that user, and the
services that correspond to the SDP information included in the
request. It forwards this information to a trusted proxy which forwards it to
a trusted gateway. Note that these examples consist of partial SIP
messages that illustrate only those headers relevant to the
authenticated identity problem. The examples themselves seem identity related too with 407
Proxy Authorization which is not related to the functionality in this draft. Since SDP is the most likely means to determine the service
I think this should be shown in the examples Probably two examples are needed one with P-Preferred-Service
and one without. Also I think we should have in one of the examples the proxy stripping the P-Asserted-Service header at the edge of the trust
domain, Andrew
Allen Manager
Standards Research
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