Thanks Pini,
I would have professed, the image is nothing but composition. There are only
two to three fundamental elements, classic comp., background, vertical and
horizontal.
Gregory
Gig Harbor, WA.
-----Original Message-----
From: Pini Vollach
Sent: Friday, January 10, 2014 3:21 AM
To: List for Photo/Imaging Educators - Professionals - Students
Subject: RE: 9 members' photographs in PF's exhibit space on JAN 04, 2014
Happy New Year!
The PhotoForum members' gallery/exhibit space was updated JAN 04, 2014.
Authors with work now on display at:
http://people.rit.edu/andpph/gallery.html include:
Gregory david Stempel - Street Lamps
This should be a "composition" type of image.
Although the colors are nice, I find the composition is weak.
Bob McCulloch - Boats
Here the composition is better for me but not perfect.
I would prefer the left side of the pier to reach the frame corner (not only
its shadow )
Dan Mitchell - Android
Nice idea, some figures (humans) should be eliminated.
Tina Manley - Children with Pig, 2002
Very good image! Interesting subject with good composition.
I like the cropped girl in the right side.
John Palcewski - Hand
It looks like you enlarged 1% of a bigger frame to crop this.
I would prefer to see more crisp sharp hand.
Not sure about un revealing her eye.
Yoram Gelman - Veranda in Decay
Very nice light and shadows play, I think this image could gain from using
wider lens.
Christopher Strevens - The way.
Like in Bob's image, rotate the camera a little more until bottom left
corner of the frame coincide with wall / floor line so more objects will
"go" to the right - can be a little better.
Art Faul -
A panorama. You wrote 17X32 but this is not the aspect ratio of this pano.
I was thinking maybe you intend to the inner image but after visiting your
web page I understood it is not.
I found the other images on this web site are more interesting than this
one.
Randy Little -
Interesting story but:
Whose image shall I review here ?
Pini
