-----Original Message----- From: owner-photoforum@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-photoforum@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Emily L. Ferguson Sent: 10 January 2014 17:00 To: List for Photo/Imaging Educators - Professionals - Students Subject: Re: 9 members' photographs in PF's exhibit space on JAN 04, 2014 At 6:03 PM +0000 1/4/14, Andrew Davidhazy wrote: >Happy New Year! > >The PhotoForum members' gallery/exhibit space was updated JAN 04, 2014. >Authors with work now on display at: >http://people.rit.edu/andpph/gallery.html include: > > Gregory david Stempel - Street Lamps Too much information on the Right side. Not quite enough on the top. >Bob McCulloch - Boats Extremely common shot. Just a report. If you live where this happens all the time, go back and take the same situation 15 times or so until you find a new way of saying it. >Dan Mitchell - Android It's a shame they didn't alternate the womanniken legs when they set them up. Kinda a standard perspective showing some tired slice-of-life but not enough effort on the part of the Android holder. > Tina Manley - Children with Pig, 2002 Really dark on my monitor. I wish there were some connection between the kids and the pig, instead of between the kids and the photographer. Personally, I'm not much into posed shots. >John Palcewski - Hand It would be more interesting if there were some evidence that the facial expression was connected to the hand, or the hand shape. The facial expression is very strong, competing with the position of the hand within the frame and possibly giving the lie to the captioned subject. >Yoram Gelman - Veranda in Decay I looked for quite a while trying to figure out the decay part. There is a small gap between the farthest post and the railing to its right. I think I'd prefer a little less black. >Christopher Strevens - The way. Trash. No particular evidence of a way, except possibly of the way people abuse their environments. Somehow I doubt that's what Chris was trying to say. chris It was the wrong photograph. It shows the smokers den in this proudly proclaimed non smoking hospital.... >Art Faul - Not sure what the image has to do with the caption, especially when digital display in the forum gallery is so poorly suited to revealing evidence of print quality. Not inclined to keep looking when such ugly language accompanies the presentation. >Randy Little - Wonderful how much improved graphic design has become since this business card. The card exposes to me how ugly typewriter font has always been. No evidence on the card for why "Meyer" is being mentioned in the caption, or for what a bi-plane aerial photography service has to do with the Indy 500. >To participate in this activity find instructions at: >http://people.rit.edu/andpph/gallery-sub.html -- Emily L. Ferguson mailto:elf@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx 508-563-6822 New England landscapes, wooden boats and races http://www.landsedgephoto.com HOT OFF THE PRESS! SAILING SEPIA IMAGES VOL II: http://www.lulu.com/spotlight/elfpix Check out my Spring daily photograph project at: http://tinyurl.com/3a6m7g6 And Summer: http://tinyurl.com/22juo5s Autumn now complete here: http://tinyurl.com/26pdgz9 Winter concluded here: http://tinyurl.com/2co5wkg