On Sat, September 21, 2013 4:57 am, Andrew Davidhazy wrote:
The PhotoForum members' gallery/exhibit space was updated Sept. 21, 2013.
Authors with work now on display at:
http://people.rit.edu/andpph/gallery.html include:
Jim Snarski - Flight
I know that wildlife photography is difficult, and I applaud folks who
attempt it. I guess I'd like the bird coming at me instead of away from
me, but you got his head, and that's good. The exposure of the wings look
a bit blown out.
Lea Murphy - Jim at the gym
Lots of vignette here; seems a bit excessive. His legs seem a bit bright.
His pose and _expression_ are very good, as is the overall mood of the
picture.
Robert G. Earnest -
My favorite this week. The lighting, exposure and composition are very
good. I like the rocks going one way, and the buildings going the other.
I don't know how the rocks were lit.
John Palcewski - Boarding
I guess I'd like the man to be in focus like the plane, but a quick shot
while boarding a plane is difficult, at best. And I like how the man's
head fits into the letter T.
Bob McCulloch - Highland Light
A pretty picture, but it doesn't pull me in to it. Perhaps a different
composition utilizing the fence a bit better, or a bit later in the day
when the light would be slightly warmer?
Pablo Coronel - Thales Intersect Theorem
A nice geometric composition from an unusual perspective. I have no ideas
where you were to get that height and angle.
Roger Eichhorn - Star Trails.
I've never tried star trails, but this is a good attempt (and a good back
story, too). But the picture doesn't pull me in, either, although I like
the "mistake" of the star trails going the other way on the right side.
Pini Vollach - Alcoholism
Sometimes, a good picture is difficult to look at. This is an excellent
example. These girls are all someone's daughter, and I'm damn glad that my
daughter isn't anything like them!
Andrew
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