On Thu, May 19, 2022 at 10:11:06AM -0400, Tom Lane wrote: > I do not like your proposed wording, as it seems way too dense. > Can't we avoid the parenthetical remarks (plural) inside a sub-clause? > You're asking the reader to keep track of about three levels of > interrupt. Yes, I was a bit unhappy with this wording. > Maybe just put the Windows info in a separate sentence: > > ... located at ~/.pg_service.conf</filename>. > On Microsoft Windows, it is located at > %APPDATA%\postgresql\.pg_service.conf, where %APPDATA% means the > Application Data subdirectory in the user's profile. > In either case, the location can be overridden by setting ... > > ISTR there's precedent elsewhere for doing it about like that. I'm fine with it. I still kept the default location full description in both places as those end up in quite different part of the documentation, which seems more helpful.