On Thu, 1 Sep 2022 22:47:22 +0900, Akira Yokosawa wrote:
> Perfbook's convention is to put footnotes after punctuation marks.
> There are a couple of footnotes placed in front of commas.
>
> Fix them.
>
> While here, fill in a missing comma in front of a footnote in datastruct
> so that the phrase "even with today's large-memory systems" reads as such.
>
> Signed-off-by: Akira Yokosawa <akiyks@xxxxxxxxx>
> ---
> I'm thinking of adding rules to catch this sort of inconsistencies in
> punctcheck.pl.
> The one in datastuct would be hard for such a dumb script, though.
>
> Thanks, Akira
> --
> datastruct/datastruct.tex | 2 +-
> intro/intro.tex | 4 ++--
> toolsoftrade/toolsoftrade.tex | 4 ++--
> 3 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/datastruct/datastruct.tex b/datastruct/datastruct.tex
> index 714795f7c5ed..2b802e0518a5 100644
> --- a/datastruct/datastruct.tex
> +++ b/datastruct/datastruct.tex
> @@ -2132,7 +2132,7 @@ the one hand, and performance and simplicity on the other.
> Fortunately, the relatively large memories available on modern
> systems have allowed us to prioritize performance and simplicity
> over memory overhead.
> -However, even with today's large-memory systems\footnote{
> +However, even with today's large-memory systems,\footnote{
> Smartphones with gigabytes of memory, anyone?}
Paul, you might want to update the text of this footnote.
Today's smartphones actually have gigabytes of memory...
Thanks, Akira
> it is sometimes necessary to take extreme measures to reduce
> memory overhead.
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