Re: [PATCH-perfbook] Fix a little grammar mistake

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Hello Zhouyi,

On Thu, 19 Aug 2021 15:51:58 +0800, Zhouyi Zhou wrote:
> Hi Paul,
> 
> I think there is a little grammer mistake in answer to quick quiz 10.8,
> I am not so sure because my English is not so well ;-)
> 
> Thanks
> Zhouyi
> 
> Signed-off-by: Zhouyi Zhou <zhouzhouyi@xxxxxxxxx>
> ---
>  datastruct/datastruct.tex | 2 +-
>  1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
> 
> diff --git a/datastruct/datastruct.tex b/datastruct/datastruct.tex
> index adb102d..68341f2 100644
> --- a/datastruct/datastruct.tex
> +++ b/datastruct/datastruct.tex
> @@ -963,1 +963,1 @@ not recommended for production use.
>  	In theory, it isn't any safer, and a useful exercise would be
> 	to run these programs on larger systems.
>  	In practice, there are a lot more systems with more than 28~CPUs
> -	than there are systems with more than 448 CPUs.

This can be parsed as follows:

    In practice, there are a lot more X than there are Y.

, where

    X: systems with more than 28~CPUs
    Y: systems with more than 448 CPUs

So there is no grammatical error here.
Three uses of "than" in a sentence might be confusing, though.

Paul might have an idea of a less-confusing sentence.

        Thanks, Akira 

> +	are systems with more than 448 CPUs.
>  	In addition, other testing has shown that RCU read-side primitives
>  	offer consistent performance and scalability up to at least 1024 CPUs.
>  }\QuickQuizEnd
> 



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