On Mon, Jun 14, 2021 at 01:00:25PM +0900, Akira Yokosawa wrote:
> As Listing 9.20 shows set_config() as a whole, replace the reference
> to the line-count range with that to the Listing itself.
> Also adjust conjugation of verbs.
>
> Fixes: 787eb4586767 ("defer/rcuusage: Add RCU space-time code and diagram")
> Signed-off-by: Akira Yokosawa <akiyks@xxxxxxxxx>
> ---
> Hi Paul,
>
> These patches are trivial fixes independent of the planned
> colon-related changes.
Good eyes on both patches, queued and pushed, thank you!
Thanx, Paul
> Thanks, Akira
> --
> defer/rcuusage.tex | 8 ++++----
> 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/defer/rcuusage.tex b/defer/rcuusage.tex
> index 8e705ce4..b3d79d13 100644
> --- a/defer/rcuusage.tex
> +++ b/defer/rcuusage.tex
> @@ -798,7 +798,7 @@ by the RCU singleton data structure illustrated in
> \cref{fig:defer:Insertion With Concurrent Readers,fig:defer:Deletion With Concurrent Readers}.
> This structure is defined on \clnrefrange{myconfig.b}{myconfig.e} of
> \cref{lst:defer:Singleton Get}, and contains two integer fields,
> -\co{->a} and \co{->b}.
> +\co{->a} and \co{->b} (\path{singleton.c}).
> The current instance of this structure is referenced by the \co{curconfig}
> pointer defined on \clnref{myconfig.e}.
> \end{fcvref}
> @@ -828,9 +828,9 @@ with each other.
> \end{fcvref}
>
> \begin{fcvref}[ln:defer:singleton:set]
> -The structure is updated by the \co{set_config()} function shown on
> -\clnrefrange{set_config.b}{set_config.e}.
> -\Clnrefrange{allocinit.b}{allocinit.e} allocates and initializes a
> +The structure is updated by the \co{set_config()} function shown in
> +\cref{lst:defer:Singleton Set}.
> +\Clnrefrange{allocinit.b}{allocinit.e} allocate and initialize a
> new \co{myconfig} structure.
> \Clnref{xchg} atomically exchanges a pointer to this new structure
> with the pointer to the old structure in \co{curconfig}, while also
> --
> 2.17.1
>
