On Sun, Mar 14, 2021 at 12:32:14AM +0900, Akira Yokosawa wrote: > On Fri, 12 Mar 2021 21:38:26 -0800, Paul E. McKenney wrote: > > On Sat, Mar 13, 2021 at 12:35:50PM +0900, Akira Yokosawa wrote: > [...] > > > > I queued and pushed your fixes above, thank you! > > > > And I will be doing another rc this weekend in order to give us both > > some time for proofreading. I intend to revisit the changes that I > > made, and I of course welcome any and all additional bug reports and > > fixes. > > There can be conflicts, but you are good at resolving them. > Expect a couple of patches soon. Very good, looking forward to them! > >> A much natural option would be to add a couple of paragraphs in front > >> of the figure so that at least a few sentences make the following > >> page in 1c builds. > > > > Your concern is the large quantities of vertical whitespace on page > > 569 of perfbook-1c.pdf? > > Well, they don't look that ugly. There are much wider gaps elsewhere > near section epigraphs. > > My main concern is the "H" option, which is considered as a last resort. > It will likely bite you when you add/remove some text around it. Ah, I see. Otherwise the figure ends up on a page by itself. > > I could imagine expanding on the changes > > in tooling from 2003 to 2006 that Linus alluded to. I could also > > imagine filling in on my attempts to get the book going from late > > 2004 to 2006. > > That would eliminate the adhoc code for 1c layouts. > Float objects near the end of a document/chapter are sometimes > quite tricky. For this edition, it will be safer for me to do "make -1c" after each change to summary.tex to check that figure than to work out how to expand that section while still having it read well. But I added comments to remind myself of this for the third edition. Thanx, Paul > Thanks, Akira > > > > Or am I missing your point? > > > > Thanx, Paul > > > >> Thanks, Akira > >> > >>> > >>> And this book is also for everyone else who would like to add low-level > >>> concurrency to their skillset. > >>>