On Fri, Oct 11, 2019 at 09:57:35PM -0700, Paul E. McKenney wrote:
> On Fri, Oct 11, 2019 at 11:43:25PM +0900, Akira Yokosawa wrote:
> > Hi Paul,
> >
> > As my pending list of patches has become long, and you've start updating
> > perfbook, I'm submitting the changes as a pull request.
> >
> > Among the changes, there are a few which affect the contents.
> > So here is a list of commits you might want a closer look:
> >
> > 1479c0450d5a ("together/count: Use \dots for ellipses")
> > I know you are not a great fan of \dots, but I want them look better.
> >
> > 1d2970a0287b ("together/refcnt: Clarify corresponding Linux kernel version")
> > This section talking about code from old Linux kernel. They are presented
> > as examples, so I'm not sure updating the code is whothwhile.
> >
> > f707214e9b45 ("Fix cross refernece to paragraph")
> > Cross references to this paragraph have never worked. By using the newly
> > defined macro \pararef{}, references are made by the title and page number
> > of the paragraph.
> >
> > 0ef7eb13286c ("memorder: Tweak list of sections")
> > I'm not sure you like this change, but I don't think its a big deal.
> >
> > dfcde1b74ecf ("Warn of buggy 'cleveref' package")
> > As long as you stick with Ubuntu Xenial, this change has no effect.
> > Ubuntu Bionic's packaging of Tex Live happened at an unfortunate
> > timing just before the release of Tex Live 2018.
> >
> > Can you pull them as they are, and do additional edit as you like?
>
> These look good and I have pulled them, thank you! I will push them
> out once I get home. (Current Internet OK for email, not so much for
> "git push".)
>
> For whatever it is worth, I am running Ubuntu 18.04 on one system and
> Ubuntu 19.04 on another. ;-)
Which did get me the expected error message on 18.04:
############################################################
### Buggy version of LaTeX package 'cleveref' detected!! ###
### (Known issue on Ubuntu 18.04 LTS) ###
### Please consider installing a stable version. ###
### See item 10 in FAQ-BUILD.txt for further info. ###
############################################################
And following the procedure called out in FAQ-BUILD.txt item 10
took care of things, so good show! ;-)
Thanx, Paul
> > Thanks, Akira
> > --
> > The following changes since commit 89dbb755fc1aea3b5bf4c19ecafebdee1fe486cf:
> >
> > debugging: Add point about focus on bad things promoting good things (2019-10-09 18:15:48 -0700)
> >
> > are available in the Git repository at:
> >
> > https://github.com/akiyks/perfbook.git tags/for-paul
> >
> > for you to fetch changes up to dfcde1b74ecf6b366a756c0c4fce3d7ff8132f91:
> >
> > Warn of buggy 'cleveref' package (2019-10-11 22:57:17 +0900)
> >
> > ----------------------------------------------------------------
> > Akira Yokosawa (25):
> > count_end_rcu.c: Remove unnecessary READ_ONCE()
> > together/count: Use \dots for ellipses
> > together: Apply new scheme of code snippets
> > together/refcnt: Clarify corresponding Linux kernel version
> > together/refcnt: Reflect reordering of chapters
> > together/refcnt: Remove out-of-date sentence in QQA 13.2
> > advsync: Apply new scheme of code snippets
> > Fix cross refernece to paragraph
> > memorder: Apply new scheme of code snippets (part 1/3)
> > memorder: Apply new scheme of code snippets (part 2/3)
> > memorder: Apply new scheme of code snippets (part 3/3)
> > memorder: Apply 'cleveref' way of cross reference
> > memorder: Tweak list of sections
> > Define '\crefthro' for 'Sections~m.n through~m.o'
> > future: Apply new scheme of code snippets
> > future: Apply 'cleveref' way of cross reference
> > appendix/questions/after: Apply new scheme of code snippet
> > appendix/questions: Apply 'cleveref' way of cross reference
> > appendix/toyrcu: Apply new scheme of code snippets
> > appendix/toyrcu: Convert \lnref to \clnref and its variations
> > appendix/toyrcu: Apply 'cleveref' way of cross references
> > Set 'lmtt' as \ttdefault for listing* environment
> > appendix/whymb: Apply new scheme of code snippets
> > appendix/whymb: Apply cleveref way of cross reference
> > Warn of buggy 'cleveref' package
> >
> > CodeSamples/api-pthreads/QAfter/time.c | 16 +-
> > CodeSamples/count/count_end_rcu.c | 77 +-
> > CodeSamples/defer/rcu_lock_percpu.c | 6 +-
> > CodeSamples/defer/rcu_lock_percpu.h | 2 +
> > CodeSamples/defer/rcu_qs.h | 2 +
> > CodeSamples/defer/rcu_rcg.c | 7 +-
> > CodeSamples/defer/rcu_rcg.h | 6 +-
> > CodeSamples/defer/rcu_rcpg.c | 36 +-
> > CodeSamples/defer/rcu_rcpg.h | 30 +-
> > CodeSamples/defer/rcu_rcpl.c | 27 +-
> > CodeSamples/defer/rcu_rcpl.h | 4 +
> > CodeSamples/defer/rcu_rcpls.c | 33 +-
> > CodeSamples/defer/rcu_rcpls.h | 6 +-
> > CodeSamples/formal/litmus/C-2+2W+o-o+o-o.litmus | 10 +-
> > .../formal/litmus/C-2+2W+o-wmb-o+o-wmb-o.litmus | 12 +-
> > .../formal/litmus/C-CCIRIW+o+o+o-o+o-o.litmus | 13 +-
> > .../litmus/C-LB+a-o+o-data-o+o-data-o.litmus | 10 +-
> > .../formal/litmus/C-LB+a-r+a-r+a-r+a-r.litmus | 10 +-
> > .../formal/litmus/C-LB+o-cgt-o+o-cgt-o.litmus | 10 +-
> > .../litmus/C-LB+o-data-o+o-data-o+o-data-o.litmus | 10 +-
> > CodeSamples/formal/litmus/C-LB+o-o+o-o.litmus | 12 +-
> > CodeSamples/formal/litmus/C-LB+o-r+a-o.litmus | 12 +-
> > CodeSamples/formal/litmus/C-LB+o-r+o-ctrl-o.litmus | 17 +-
> > CodeSamples/formal/litmus/C-LB+o-r+o-data-o.litmus | 14 +-
> > CodeSamples/formal/litmus/C-MP+o-o+o-rmb-o.litmus | 11 +-
> > CodeSamples/formal/litmus/C-MP+o-r+o-ctrl-o.litmus | 15 +-
> > .../formal/litmus/C-MP+o-wmb-o+o-addr-o.litmus | 24 +-
> > CodeSamples/formal/litmus/C-MP+o-wmb-o+o-o.litmus | 12 +-
> > .../formal/litmus/C-MP+o-wmb-o+o-rmb-o.litmus | 12 +-
> > .../formal/litmus/C-MP-OMCA+o-o-o+o-rmb-o.litmus | 25 +-
> > .../formal/litmus/C-R+o-wmb-o+o-mb-o.litmus | 14 +-
> > .../formal/litmus/C-S+o-wmb-o+o-addr-o.litmus | 20 +-
> > .../formal/litmus/C-SB+o-mb-o+o-mb-o.litmus | 22 +-
> > CodeSamples/formal/litmus/C-SB+o-o+o-o.litmus | 19 +-
> > .../formal/litmus/C-W+RWC+o-mb-o+a-o+o-mb-o.litmus | 10 +-
> > .../formal/litmus/C-W+RWC+o-r+a-o+o-mb-o.litmus | 26 +-
> > .../formal/litmus/C-WRC+o+o-data-o+o-rmb-o.litmus | 25 +-
> > CodeSamples/formal/litmus/C-WRC+o+o-r+a-o.litmus | 18 +-
> > .../formal/litmus/C-WWC+o-cgt-o+o-cgt-o+o.litmus | 10 +-
> > .../formal/litmus/C-Z6.2+o-r+a-o+o-mb-o.litmus | 10 +-
> > .../formal/litmus/C-Z6.2+o-r+a-r+a-r+a-o.litmus | 12 +-
> > FAQ-BUILD.txt | 15 +
> > advsync/advsync.tex | 98 +-
> > advsync/rt.tex | 359 ++-
> > appendix/questions/after.tex | 132 +-
> > appendix/questions/time.tex | 2 +-
> > appendix/toyrcu/toyrcu.tex | 727 ++----
> > appendix/whymb/whymemorybarriers.tex | 280 +--
> > datastruct/datastruct.tex | 4 +-
> > future/cpu.tex | 18 +-
> > future/formalregress.tex | 28 +-
> > future/htm.tex | 262 +-
> > future/tm.tex | 60 +-
> > memorder/memorder.tex | 2532 +++++++-------------
> > perfbook.tex | 15 +-
> > together/applyrcu.tex | 374 ++-
> > together/count.tex | 21 +-
> > together/hash.tex | 6 +-
> > together/refcnt.tex | 361 +--
> > together/together.tex | 9 +-
> > utilities/runlatex.sh | 10 +
> > 61 files changed, 2385 insertions(+), 3595 deletions(-)
