[PATCH 3/3] styleguide: Remove references to 'floatrow' and adjust context

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>From ba0af5ad755ab4e175b07abb71890077e4d54a20 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Akira Yokosawa <akiyks@xxxxxxxxx>
Date: Sat, 5 Aug 2017 12:20:00 +0900
Subject: [PATCH 3/3] styleguide: Remove references to 'floatrow' and adjust context

Also fix a typo (and -> nor).

Signed-off-by: Akira Yokosawa <akiyks@xxxxxxxxx>
---
 appendix/styleguide/styleguide.tex | 28 ++++++++++++++--------------
 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)

diff --git a/appendix/styleguide/styleguide.tex b/appendix/styleguide/styleguide.tex
index 72b8ca0..22ff2f4 100644
--- a/appendix/styleguide/styleguide.tex
+++ b/appendix/styleguide/styleguide.tex
@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@ be used as a prefix. An improper example:
 \label{sec:app:styleguide:Non-SI Unit Symbol}
 
 Although NIST style guide does not cover non-SI unit symbols
-such as ``KB'', ``MB'', and ``GB'', the same rule should be followed.
+such as ``KB'', ``MB'', nor ``GB'', the same rule should be followed.
 
 Example:
 
@@ -320,9 +320,9 @@ Line numbers are manually placed for ease of referencing them within
   number counter and the count can be displayed in the resulting
   listing. Leftmost line numbers in
   Figure~\ref{fig:app:styleguide:LaTeX Source of Sample Code Snippet}
-  are output by the feature. See the source of this Section
-  in \path{appendix/styleguide/styleguide.tex}
-  if you are interested.}
+  are output by the feature. The litmus tests in
+  Section~\ref{sec:advsync:Memory Barriers}
+  has been converted to use the auto-numbering feature.}
 
 The verbatim environment is used for listings with too many lines
 to fit in a column. It is also used to avoid overwhelming
@@ -411,8 +411,7 @@ The \qco{\\verb} macro can be used in running text if you
 need to use monospace font for a string which contains
 many characters to escape.\footnote{
   \co{\\verb} is not almighty though. For example, you can't use it
-  within a footnote nor table inside ``floatrow'' environment mentioned
-  later. If you do so, you will see a fatal latex error.
+  within a footnote. If you do so, you will see a fatal latex error.
   There are several workarounds of this problem, but as for perfbook,
   \co{\\co\{\}} should suffice.}
 
@@ -588,7 +587,10 @@ This section lists up such candidates.
 
 Strictly speaking, code snippets are \emph{not} figures.
 They deserve their own floating environment.
-The ``floatrow'' package would be of help.
+The ``float'' package would be of help.\footnote{
+  The ``floatrow'' package provides us even more flexible
+  control of floating objects. However, because of an issue
+  in two-column layout, we can not use it at the moment.}
 
 % TODO: Add example
 
@@ -602,7 +604,7 @@ top. You naturally look at the top of a table at first. Captions at
 the bottom of tables disturb this flow.
 The same can be said of code snippets, which are read from
 top to bottom.
-The floatrow package mentioned above also has the capability
+The float package mentioned above also has the capability
 to adjust layout of caption.
 
 % TODO: Add example
@@ -617,13 +619,11 @@ as the default for the environment.
 To prevent a pair of closely related figures or listings
 from being placed in different pages, it is desirable to group
 them into a single floating environment.
-The floatrow package provides the features to do so.\footnote{
+The ``subfig'' package provides the features to do so.\footnote{
   Note that the ``subfigure'' package currently declared in the
-  preamble is not used any more.
-  The floatrow package is the choice to group floating environments
-  these days.
-  One problem of grouping figures might be the learning curve
-  to do so.}
+  preamble is obsoleted by subfig package.
+  One problem of grouping figures might be the complexity in
+  \LaTeX\ source.}
 
 % TODO: Add example
 
-- 
2.7.4


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