On 2016/07/29 2:40, Paul E. McKenney wrote:
> On Thu, Jul 28, 2016 at 10:06:22PM +0900, Akira Yokosawa wrote:
>> Hi Paul,
>>
>> There are still several issues regarding Chapter 9 I want to feedback.
>> I'm afraid most of them are beyond my ability to submit as patches.
>>
>> * At the beginning of Section 9.5.2, there is a credit of the form
>> "Authors: ...".
>> But there is \OriginallyPublished{} command just above the credit.
>> I'm wondering if the credit in the text is necessary.
>> There is a similar credit at the beginning of Section 14.2, but there is
>> no \OriginallyPublished{} command there. This section seems to have been
>> written for perfbook. If this is the case, for a consistent look, it would
>> be better if the credit is moved to Appendix F.1.
>
> Good point! I am guessing that these predated \OriginallyPublished{}, and
> that I didn't get around to fixing them properly. I have now fixed them.
And I'm wondering why I didn't realize the origin of Section 14.2 is
Documentation/memory-barriers.txt...
But they look fairly different now, don't they?
Thanks, Akira
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