Re: [PATCH v11 12/12] landlock: Document Landlock's network support

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On 13/06/2023 12:13, Konstantin Meskhidze (A) wrote:


6/7/2023 8:46 AM, Jeff Xu пишет:
On Tue, Jun 6, 2023 at 7:09 AM Günther Noack <gnoack@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote:

On Tue, May 16, 2023 at 12:13:39AM +0800, Konstantin Meskhidze wrote:
Describe network access rules for TCP sockets. Add network access
example in the tutorial. Add kernel configuration support for network.

Signed-off-by: Konstantin Meskhidze <konstantin.meskhidze@xxxxxxxxxx>
---

Changes since v10:
* Fixes documentaion as Mickaёl suggested:
https://lore.kernel.org/linux-security-module/ec23be77-566e-c8fd-179e-f50e025ac2cf@xxxxxxxxxxx/

Changes since v9:
* Minor refactoring.

Changes since v8:
* Minor refactoring.

Changes since v7:
* Fixes documentaion logic errors and typos as Mickaёl suggested:
https://lore.kernel.org/netdev/9f354862-2bc3-39ea-92fd-53803d9bbc21@xxxxxxxxxxx/

Changes since v6:
* Adds network support documentaion.

---
  Documentation/userspace-api/landlock.rst | 83 ++++++++++++++++++------
  1 file changed, 62 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/userspace-api/landlock.rst b/Documentation/userspace-api/landlock.rst
index f6a7da21708a..f185dbaa726a 100644
--- a/Documentation/userspace-api/landlock.rst
+++ b/Documentation/userspace-api/landlock.rst
@@ -11,10 +11,10 @@ Landlock: unprivileged access control
  :Date: October 2022

  The goal of Landlock is to enable to restrict ambient rights (e.g. global
-filesystem access) for a set of processes.  Because Landlock is a stackable
-LSM, it makes possible to create safe security sandboxes as new security layers
-in addition to the existing system-wide access-controls. This kind of sandbox
-is expected to help mitigate the security impact of bugs or
+filesystem or network access) for a set of processes.  Because Landlock
+is a stackable LSM, it makes possible to create safe security sandboxes as new
+security layers in addition to the existing system-wide access-controls. This
+kind of sandbox is expected to help mitigate the security impact of bugs or
  unexpected/malicious behaviors in user space applications.  Landlock empowers
  any process, including unprivileged ones, to securely restrict themselves.

@@ -28,20 +28,24 @@ appropriately <kernel_support>`.
  Landlock rules
  ==============

-A Landlock rule describes an action on an object.  An object is currently a
-file hierarchy, and the related filesystem actions are defined with `access
-rights`_.  A set of rules is aggregated in a ruleset, which can then restrict
-the thread enforcing it, and its future children.
+A Landlock rule describes an action on a kernel object.  Filesystem
+objects can be defined with a file hierarchy.  Since the fourth ABI
+version, TCP ports enable to identify inbound or outbound connections.
+Actions on these kernel objects are defined according to `access
+rights`_.  A set of rules is aggregated in a ruleset, which
+can then restrict the thread enforcing it, and its future children.

I feel that this paragraph is a bit long-winded to read when the
additional networking aspect is added on top as well.  Maybe it would
be clearer if we spelled it out in a more structured way, splitting up
the filesystem/networking aspects?

Suggestion:

   A Landlock rule describes an action on an object which the process
   intends to perform.  A set of rules is aggregated in a ruleset,
   which can then restrict the thread enforcing it, and its future
   children.

   The two existing types of rules are:

   Filesystem rules
       For these rules, the object is a file hierarchy,
       and the related filesystem actions are defined with
       `filesystem access rights`.

   Network rules (since ABI v4)
       For these rules, the object is currently a TCP port,
Remote port or local port ?

    Both ports - remote or local.

Hmm, at first I didn't think it was worth talking about remote or local, but I now think it could be less confusing to specify a bit: "For these rules, the object is the socket identified with a TCP (bind or connect) port according to the related `network access rights`."

A port is not a kernel object per see, so I tried to tweak a bit the sentence. I'm not sure such detail (object vs. data) would not confuse users. Any thought?



       and the related actions are defined with `network access rights`.

Please note that the landlock(7) man page is in large parts using the
same phrasing as the kernel documentation.  It might be a good idea to
keep them in sync and structured similarly.  (On that mailing list,
the reviews are a bit more focused on good writing style.)

The same reasoning applies to the example below as well.  Explaining
multiple aspects of a thing in a single example can muddy the message,
let's try to avoid that.  But I can also see that if we had two
separate examples, a large part of the example would be duplicated.

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