"this" refers to a near object (cf. "that" for far), so s/by doing this/by doing that/, or just move the subclause to the front. --- secure-conntrack-helpers.rst | 6 +++--- 1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/secure-conntrack-helpers.rst b/secure-conntrack-helpers.rst index cbd5fd5..1acaf2e 100644 --- a/secure-conntrack-helpers.rst +++ b/secure-conntrack-helpers.rst @@ -190,8 +190,8 @@ modules by setting the port number for the module to 0. For example :: modprobe nf_conntrack_$PROTO ports=0 -The following modules will be deactivated on all flows by default by doing -this: +By doing this, the following modules will be deactivated on all flows +by default: - ftp - irc @@ -199,7 +199,7 @@ this: - sip - tftp -Some modules will not work due to the absence of ports parameter: +Due to the absence of a "ports" parameter, some modules will not work: - amanda - h323 -- 1.7.3.4 -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe netfilter-devel" in the body of a message to majordomo@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html
