Re: [PATCH 1/2 v2] hwmon (ds1621): Add DS1731 chip support to ds1621 driver

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Sorry for joining late in the game again...

On Mon, 10 Jun 2013 18:46:02 -0700, Robert Coulson wrote:
> These changes add DS1731 chip support to the ds1621 driver,
> Kconfig, and documentation.

Just two minor things I noticed while testing the ds1621 patches:

> --- a/Documentation/hwmon/ds1621
> +++ b/Documentation/hwmon/ds1621
> (...)
> @@ -72,7 +77,7 @@ Temperature conversion of the DS1621 takes up to 1000ms; internal access to
>  non-volatile registers may last for 10ms or below.
>  
>  The DS1625 is pin compatible and functionally equivalent with the DS1621,
> -but the DS1621 is meant to replace it. The DS1631 and DS1721 are also
> +but the DS1621 is meant to replace it. The DS1631, DS1721, & DS1731 are also

Please don't use "&" for "and" in plain English sentences, it hurts readability.

> @@ -84,26 +89,27 @@ explicitly instantiated, one device per address, in this address
>  range: 0x48..0x4f.
>  
>  The DS1721 is pin compatible with the DS1621, has an accuracy of +/- 1.0
> -degree Celius over a -10 to +85 degree range, a minimum/maximum alarm
> -default setting of 75 and 80 degrees respectifully, and a maximum conversion
> -time of 750ms.
> +degree Celius (from -10 to +85 degrees), a minimum/maximum alarm default

Typo: Celsius. The typo was already present before, it's not added by
this patch, but you have the opportunity to fix it.

-- 
Jean Delvare

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