A grammar error or two is probably OK in these descriptions, but these are just riddled with them in a way that makes them hard to read. Suggestions below. On 07/17/2018 04:20 AM, Kirill A. Shutemov wrote: > We don't need to have separate implementations of alloc_hugepage_vma() > for NUMA and non-NUMA. Using variant based on alloc_pages_vma() we would > cover both cases. "Using the" > This is preparation patch for allocation encrypted pages. "a preparation" "allocation encrypted pages" -> "allocation of encrypted pages" or "allocation encrypted pages" -> "allocating encrypted pages" or > alloc_pages_vma() will handle allocation of encrypted pages. With this > change we don' t need to cover alloc_hugepage_vma() separately. "don' t" -> "don't" > The change makes typo in Alpha's implementation of "a typo"
