Hi Andy - sorry for delayed reply, busy week On 01/10/2020 18:37, Andy Shevchenko wrote: > On Thu, Oct 01, 2020 at 10:33:26AM +0100, Daniel Scally wrote: > > Awesome work! > My, almost minor, comments below. Thanks as always for your help - great comments. I'll work through and make the changes you suggest to this code and also... >> * Built against media_tree instead of linus's tree - there's no T: entry in >> maintainers for the ipu3-cio2 driver but I see there're recent changes in >> media_tree so thought this was the better option. > Make sense to include T: entry as well (maybe as a separate patch). ...I agree with your other email re. turning this into a series and making the additional changes you suggested, so I'll do that too for the v3. Just a couple comments / queries: >> +// SPDX-License-Identifier: GPL-2.0 > Author line perhaps? You mean literally just like /* Authored By: Dan Scally */ or something? OK, no problem. >> +static const struct ipu3_sensor supported_devices[] = { >> + IPU3_SENSOR("INT33BE", "INT33BE:00"), >> + IPU3_SENSOR("OVTI2680", "OVTI2680:00"), >> + IPU3_SENSOR("OVTI5648", "OVTI5648:00") > In such cases please leave comma at the last item as well. Easier to extend w/o > an additional churn. > > On top of that, please avoid putting *instance* names, i.e. the second > parameters in your macro call. What code should do is to take _HID (first > parameter) and call acpi_dev_match_first_dev() or so. Yeah I was originally using the i2c_client's name field (this comes into play during cio2_bridge_reprobe_sensor()) but the matching refused to work using anything but a string literal. Let me take another look at this then. >> +static struct software_node cio2_hid_node = { CIO2_HID, }; > Here, nevertheless, comma can be removed, since update will need to change > entire line anyway. Trailing commas where lists can be extended, otherwise none - got it. >> +static int read_acpi_block(struct device *dev, char *id, void *data, u32 size) >> +{ >> + union acpi_object *obj; >> + struct acpi_buffer buffer = { ACPI_ALLOCATE_BUFFER, NULL }; >> + struct acpi_handle *handle = ACPI_HANDLE(dev); >> + acpi_status status; >> + int ret; >> + >> + status = acpi_evaluate_object(handle, id, NULL, &buffer); >> + if (ACPI_FAILURE(status)) >> + return -ENODEV; >> + >> + obj = buffer.pointer; >> + if (!obj || obj->type != ACPI_TYPE_BUFFER) { > !obj case doesn't require freeing and I would say the error message can be > amended in such case. Oops - you suggested that in the last version too and I missed it, sorry about that. I'll split those two failure modes out. >> + for (j = 4; j >= 0; j--) >> + software_node_unregister(&sensor->swnodes[j]); > Seems we may need a simple helper for this (test_printf.c has similar case), > so, what about do it here for now and probably then move to somewhere like > swnode.h or whatever holds it. > > static inline software_node_unregister_nodes_reverse(const struct software_node *nodes) > { > unsigned int i = 0; > > while (nodes[i].name) > i++; > while (i--) > software_node_unregister(&nodes[i]); > } Yeah this is a good idea; I see you suggest a new patch for it in your other email; I'll do a series in the future and add this to the swnode source file at the same time as doing the changes that you, Heikki and Sakari suggested for the other patch. >> +#define __NO_VERSION__ > What is this for? Somehow I got on the outdated page for compiling modules spanning multiple files in the linux kernel module programming guide; it's suggested there but not in the newer version. I shall remove it. >> + struct device *dev; >> + struct software_node swnodes[6]; >> + struct property_entry dev_props[3]; >> + struct property_entry ep_props[4]; >> + struct property_entry cio2_props[3]; > I'm now wondering why you can't simply put properties directly to here and do > that kcalloc / memcpy() in few functions? I mean to drop those calls and assign > properties directly. You even won't need to memset() and stack for them! I thought you were hinting that I should use kcalloc in the comments from the last patch to get an array of zero valued entries but I guess I misunderstood - I can just memset these arrays to 0 and assign all but the last entry directly and that seems to work fine, so I'll switch to that. >> struct cio2_device *cio2; >> + struct fwnode_handle *endpoint; >> int r; > Reverse xmas tree order. TIL - thanks, I'll do a pass over the rest of it and make sure that I follow that everywhere else too >> + endpoint = fwnode_graph_get_next_endpoint(pci_dev->dev.fwnode, NULL); > dev_fwnode() I avoided that thinking there might be a case where a CIO2 device has a fwnode but not endpoints defined for some reason, but I'm not familiar enough to judge whether that situation will ever occur - if it's safe to do it that way then I'll switch it over.