Re: [PATCH] dvb-api: update documentation, chapter1

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On Thu, Feb 26, 2009 at 7:14 AM, Mauro Carvalho Chehab
<mchehab@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> It seems better to say, instead, that "Version 4 was suggested, but it weren't completed nor implemented".

That's improper.  I think you mean, "Version 4 was suggested but
neither completed, nor implemented".

Why do I have a feeling even the updated doc will be full of spelling
& grammatical errors?  ;)

>> +This Linux DVB API documentation will be extended to reflect these
>> additions.
>
> While we don't finish adding the S2API parts, maybe we should say instead:
>
> This document is currently under review to reflect the S2API additions.

Maybe you should say, "This documentation is a work-in-progress and
doesn't contain the full scope of newer additions year, such as
S2API".

Also, you might want to consider changing "DVB cards" to "DVB
devices".  For example, I don't know anybody who refers to USB DVB
devices as 'DVB cards'.

Cheers,
-Derek
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