Alejandro Colomar <alx@xxxxxxxxxx> writes: >> -Linux is a flavor of UNIX, and as a first approximation >> -all user commands under UNIX work precisely the same under >> -Linux (and FreeBSD and lots of other UNIX-like systems). >> +Linux is a flavor of UNIX, and user commands under UNIX >> +work similarly under Linux (and lots of other UNIX-like systems too, >> +like FreeBSD). > > I like the changes in this paragraph, except for the removal of "as a > first approximation". Not a big deal, though. I don't hear "as a first approximation" spoken often and it just brings more cognitive overhead to the content in my opinion. >> -It is not built-in, but is just a program >> -and you can change your shell. >> -Everybody has their own favorite one. >> +It is not built-in, >> +but is just another program. > > I would maybe use a ';'? > > It is not built-in; > it is just another program. That's better, I'll use that in v2. > I think I'll apply this patch. Let me meditate it to-night. I CCed > Doug, in case he has any comments (it would be great to hear his > feedback). > > Have a lovely night! > Alex Sweet, thanks for the review.
