[PATCH] string_copying.7: tfix

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Signed-off-by: Lennart Jablonka <humm@xxxxxxxxx>
---
On some of the commas:  There are a few of instances of

	Subject verb object partclause, advphrase.

For example:

	This function catenates the input character sequence contained in a null-padded wixed-width buffer, into a destination string.
	| subject     | verb    | object                     | participial clause                           | adverbial phrase       |

Dropping the relative clause, there shouldn't be a comma preceding the
restrictive adverbial phrase: The input character sequence is really,
always catenated into a destination string; that is essential.

The participial clause, being non-restrictive---there is but one input
character sequence that could be meant---, should be enclosed by commas.
That is the existing comma's purpose and doesn't work without the added,
first comma.

 man7/string_copying.7 | 26 +++++++++++++-------------
 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

diff --git a/man7/string_copying.7 b/man7/string_copying.7
index da1fc6752..04426ef77 100644
--- a/man7/string_copying.7
+++ b/man7/string_copying.7
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ const char *restrict " src ,
 .PP
 // Zero a fixed-width buffer, and
 // copy a string into a character sequence with truncation.
-.BI "char *strncpy(char " dest "[restrict ." sz "], \
+.BI "char *strncpy(char " dst "[restrict ." sz "], \
 const char *restrict " src ,
 .BI "               size_t " sz );
 .PP
@@ -280,9 +280,9 @@ instead of
 In programs that make considerable use of strings or character sequences,
 and need the best performance,
 using overlapping character sequences can make a big difference.
-It allows holding subsequences of a larger character sequence.
+It allows holding sub-sequences of a larger character sequence,
 while not duplicating memory
-nor using time to do a copy.
+or using time to do a copy.
 .PP
 However, this is delicate,
 since it requires using character sequences.
@@ -397,7 +397,7 @@ It returns a pointer suitable for chaining.
 Truncation needs to be detected only once after the last chained call.
 .IP
 This function is not provided by any library;
-See EXAMPLES for a reference implementation.
+see EXAMPLES for a reference implementation.
 .\" ----- DESCRIPTION :: Functions :: strlcpy(3bsd), strlcat(3bsd) ----/
 .TP
 .BR strlcpy (3bsd)
@@ -427,7 +427,7 @@ isn't large enough to hold the copy,
 the resulting character sequence is truncated.
 Since it creates a character sequence,
 it doesn't need to write a terminating null byte.
-It's impossible to distinguish truncation by the result of the call,
+It's impossible to distinguish truncation by the result of the call
 from a character sequence that just fits the destination buffer;
 truncation should be detected by
 comparing the length of the input string
@@ -444,8 +444,8 @@ is a more useful alternative to this function.
 .\" ----- DESCRIPTION :: Functions :: zustr2ustp(3) --------------------/
 .TP
 .BR zustr2ustp (3)
-This function copies the input character sequence
-contained in a null-padded wixed-width buffer,
+This function copies the input character sequence,
+contained in a null-padded fixed-width buffer,
 into a destination character sequence.
 The programmer is responsible for allocating a buffer large enough.
 It returns a pointer suitable for chaining.
@@ -455,12 +455,12 @@ since the size of the original character sequence is always known,
 so it wouldn't be very useful.
 .IP
 This function is not provided by any library;
-See EXAMPLES for a reference implementation.
+see EXAMPLES for a reference implementation.
 .\" ----- DESCRIPTION :: Functions :: zustr2stp(3) --------------------/
 .TP
 .BR zustr2stp (3)
-This function copies the input character sequence
-contained in a null-padded wixed-width buffer,
+This function copies the input character sequence,
+contained in a null-padded fixed-width buffer,
 into a destination string.
 The programmer is responsible for allocating a buffer large enough.
 It returns a pointer suitable for chaining.
@@ -470,7 +470,7 @@ since the size of the original character sequence is always known,
 so it wouldn't be very useful.
 .IP
 This function is not provided by any library;
-See EXAMPLES for a reference implementation.
+see EXAMPLES for a reference implementation.
 .\" ----- DESCRIPTION :: Functions :: strncat(3) ----------------------/
 .TP
 .BR strncat (3)
@@ -478,8 +478,8 @@ Do not confuse this function with
 .BR strncpy (3);
 they are not related at all.
 .IP
-This function catenates the input character sequence
-contained in a null-padded wixed-width buffer,
+This function catenates the input character sequence,
+contained in a null-padded fixed-width buffer,
 into a destination string.
 The programmer is responsible for allocating a buffer large enough.
 The return value is useless.
-- 
2.41.0



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