Hi ALex, At 2023-01-07T13:57:36+0100, Alejandro Colomar wrote: > > On 1/7/23 10:55, G. Branden Robinson wrote: > > > * Tighten cross reference. It wastes words to tell people to look > > > elsewhere "for further information". Why else would they look there? > > > * Use passive voice less. > > > * Relocate sentence for more coherent discussion. > > > * Say "application _programming_ interface". > > Hmm, after reconsideration, I've dropped the patch. I'm not sure about it. What is causing you concern? Regards, Branden
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