* G. Branden Robinson <g.branden.robinson@xxxxxxxxx>, 2022-06-06, 16:33:
At 2022-06-06T15:40:08-0400, Peter Xu wrote:
I think the patch below would improve a little bit the wording (and
newlines). I still have a bit of trouble understanding "When a
kernel-originated fault was triggered on the registered range with
this userfaultfd". Did you maybe mean "range registered" instead of
"registered range"?
Since I'm not a native speaker I don't immediately see the difference
between the two.
Short answer: I think your existing wording is acceptable.
I think you missed the context. You get a different parse tree when you
swap the words:
...triggered (on the registered range) (with this userfaultfd).
vs
...triggered (on the range (registered with this userfaultfd)).
--
Jakub Wilk
