Sorry I took so long to get around to reviewing this. Some comments: - /lib/ld-linux.so.* [OPTIONS] [PROGRAM [ARGUMENTS]] + /lib/ld-linux.so.* [--list] [--verify] [--library-path + paths] [--inhibit-rpath objects] [--audit auditors] program + [arg...] Unless the options to a program are very short, I don't like to see them all listed in a synopsis, as it's too long-winded. Also, I prefer upper-case for metasyntactic variables in man pages. So in fact, the original is fine, though I do like ellipsis to indicate multiple arguments, so: - /lib/ld-linux.so.* [OPTIONS] [PROGRAM [ARGUMENTS]] + /lib/ld-linux.so.* [OPTION...] [PROGRAM [ARGUMENT...]] I don't think the phrase '"turn-key"' is helpful here; I'd remove it. + hardware capabilities such as /usr/lib/sse2/. The dynamic Insert comma after "hardware capabilities". + CPU. The following names are currently recognized: Alpha ev4, + ev5, ev56, ev6, ev67 Insert para break before "Alpha". + multiple version of the same library is version → versions -- http://rrt.sc3d.org -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe linux-man" in the body of a message to majordomo@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html