On Tue, Sep 27, 2011 at 10:31 PM, Jon Grant <jg@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > Hello > > Just wondering if this could be re-phrased to avoid starting sentence with > "but": Hi Jon, I'm not too worried about this. Cheers, Michael > http://man7.org/linux/man-pages/online/pages/man3/wmempcpy.3.html > > "But instead.." > > How about simply removing "But" and adding a comma after "dest', so it > becomes: > > Instead of returning the value of dest, it returns a pointer to the byte > following the last written byte." > > -- I'd be tempted to also say "after" rather than "following", to keep the > words shorter! > > Best regards, Jon > -- Michael Kerrisk Linux man-pages maintainer; http://www.kernel.org/doc/man-pages/ Author of "The Linux Programming Interface"; http://man7.org/tlpi/ -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe linux-man" in the body of a message to majordomo@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html
