On Wed, Dec 07, 2022 at 12:33:19PM +0800, David Gow wrote:
> The "How Do I Use This" section of index.rst and "Next Steps" section of
> start.rst were just copies of the table of contents, and therefore
> weren't really useful either when looking a sphinx generated output
> (which already had the TOC visible) or when reading the source (where
> it's just a list of files that ls could give you).
>
> Instead, provide a small number of concrete next steps, and a bit more
> description about what the pages contain.
>
> This also removes the broken reference to 'tips.rst', which was
> previously removed.
>
> Fixes: 4399c737a97d ("Documentation: kunit: Remove redundant 'tips.rst' page")
> Signed-off-by: David Gow <davidgow@xxxxxxxxxx>
> ---
>
> Thanks everyone for reviewing v1. Since this is pretty much a complete
> rewrite, I've left Reviewed-by tags off, as I don't feel the previous
> reviews totally apply. Feel free to review again if you have any
> comments.
>
> Cheers,
> -- David
>
> Changes since v1:
> https://lore.kernel.org/linux-kselftest/20221129094732.306449-1-davidgow@xxxxxxxxxx/
> - Totally rewrite both sections to only include (and provide more
> context for) the most concrete next steps.
> - Thanks Bagas for pointing out that this basically duplicates the TOC
> as-is.
>
> ---
> Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/index.rst | 19 ++++++++-----------
> Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/start.rst | 19 +++++++++----------
> 2 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/index.rst b/Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/index.rst
> index d5629817cd72..b3593ae29ace 100644
> --- a/Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/index.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/index.rst
> @@ -99,14 +99,11 @@ Read also :ref:`kinds-of-tests`.
> How do I use it?
> ================
>
> -* Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/start.rst - for KUnit new users.
> -* Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/architecture.rst - KUnit architecture.
> -* Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/run_wrapper.rst - run kunit_tool.
> -* Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/run_manual.rst - run tests without kunit_tool.
> -* Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/usage.rst - write tests.
> -* Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/tips.rst - best practices with
> - examples.
> -* Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/api/index.rst - KUnit APIs
> - used for testing.
> -* Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/faq.rst - KUnit common questions and
> - answers.
> +You can find a step-by-step guide to writing and running KUnit tests in
> +Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/start.rst
> +
> +Alternatively, feel free to look through the rest of the KUnit documentation,
> +or to experiment with tools/testing/kunit/kunit.py and the example test under
> +lib/kunit/kunit-example-test.c
> +
> +Happy testing!
> diff --git a/Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/start.rst b/Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/start.rst
> index f4f504f1fb15..224387a43543 100644
> --- a/Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/start.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/start.rst
> @@ -294,13 +294,12 @@ Congrats! You just wrote your first KUnit test.
> Next Steps
> ==========
>
> -* Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/architecture.rst - KUnit architecture.
> -* Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/run_wrapper.rst - run kunit_tool.
> -* Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/run_manual.rst - run tests without kunit_tool.
> -* Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/usage.rst - write tests.
> -* Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/tips.rst - best practices with
> - examples.
> -* Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/api/index.rst - KUnit APIs
> - used for testing.
> -* Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/faq.rst - KUnit common questions and
> - answers.
> +If you're interested in using some of the more advanced features of kunit.py,
> +take a look at Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/run_wrapper.rst
> +
> +If you'd like to run tests without using kunit.py, check out
> +Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/run_manual.rst
> +
> +For more information on writing KUnit tests (including some common techniques
> +for testing different things), see Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/usage.rst
> +
Much better, thanks!
Reviewed-by: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@xxxxxxxxx>
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