Do basic editing & correction to hid-sensor.rst: - use HID consistently instead of hid - drop a duplicate word - change article adjective an -> a - fix grammar & punctuation - spell out RW -> read-write - hyphenate multi-word adjectives Signed-off-by: Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> Cc: Jiri Kosina <jikos@xxxxxxxxxx> Cc: Jonathan Cameron <jic23@xxxxxxxxxx> Cc: Srinivas Pandruvada <srinivas.pandruvada@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> Cc: linux-input@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Cc: linux-iio@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Cc: Jonathan Corbet <corbet@xxxxxxx> Cc: linux-doc@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx --- v2: rebase & resend Documentation/hid/hid-sensor.rst | 18 +++++++++--------- 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-) --- linux-next-20201201.orig/Documentation/hid/hid-sensor.rst +++ linux-next-20201201/Documentation/hid/hid-sensor.rst @@ -48,12 +48,12 @@ for different sensors. For example an ac an ambient light sensor can send illumination data. So the implementation has two parts: -- Core hid driver +- Core HID driver - Individual sensor processing part (sensor drivers) Core driver ----------- -The core driver registers (hid-sensor-hub) registers as a HID driver. It parses +The core driver (hid-sensor-hub) registers as a HID driver. It parses report descriptors and identifies all the sensors present. It adds an MFD device with name HID-SENSOR-xxxx (where xxxx is usage id from the specification). @@ -95,14 +95,14 @@ Registration functions:: u32 usage_id, struct hid_sensor_hub_callbacks *usage_callback): -Registers callbacks for an usage id. The callback functions are not allowed +Registers callbacks for a usage id. The callback functions are not allowed to sleep:: int sensor_hub_remove_callback(struct hid_sensor_hub_device *hsdev, u32 usage_id): -Removes callbacks for an usage id. +Removes callbacks for a usage id. Parsing function:: @@ -166,7 +166,7 @@ This allows some differentiating use cas Some common use cases are debug other sensors or to provide some events like keyboard attached/detached or lid open/close. -To allow application to utilize these sensors, here they are exported uses sysfs +To allow application to utilize these sensors, here they are exported using sysfs attribute groups, attributes and misc device interface. An example of this representation on sysfs:: @@ -207,9 +207,9 @@ An example of this representation on sys │ │ │ ├── input-1-200202-units │ │ │ ├── input-1-200202-value -Here there is a custom sensors with four fields, two feature and two inputs. +Here there is a custom sensor with four fields: two feature and two inputs. Each field is represented by a set of attributes. All fields except the "value" -are read only. The value field is a RW field. +are read only. The value field is a read-write field. Example:: @@ -237,6 +237,6 @@ These reports are pushed using misc devi │ │ │ ├── 10:53 -> ../HID-SENSOR-2000e1.6.auto │ ├── HID-SENSOR-2000e1.6.auto -Each reports can be of variable length preceded by a header. This header -consist of a 32 bit usage id, 64 bit time stamp and 32 bit length field of raw +Each report can be of variable length preceded by a header. This header +consists of a 32-bit usage id, 64-bit time stamp and 32-bit length field of raw data.
