Re: [PATCH] hwmon: Documentation: Fix grammar in fan speed trip points explanation

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On Wed, Nov 06, 2024 at 06:38:49PM -0700, Abhinav Saxena wrote:
> Fix several grammatical issues in the fan speed trip points documentation:
> - Replace awkward "which % the fan should run at at" construction with
>  clearer "that specify the percentage at which"
> - Fix incorrect "is chip depended" to "are chip dependent" for correct
>  verb agreement and adjective form
> - Improve readability by reorganizing first sentence and separating the
>  complex explanation into simpler parts
> - Add hyphen before "see" to improve readability
> - Remove redundant "at" in temperature description
> 
> No functional changes, documentation only.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Abhinav Saxena <xandfury@xxxxxxxxx>

Applied, after fixing the subject (which needs to include the affected
driver).

Thanks,
Guenter




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