Re: [PATCH v2,RESEND] doc: zh_CN: fix style problems for io_ordering.txt

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On Sat, 14 Mar 2020 23:08:55 -0700
Wang Wenhu <wenhu.wang@xxxxxxxx> wrote:

> Problems exist in the Chinese translation of io_ordering.txt.
> Partly for the difference between Chinese and English character
> encoding format, and the others are of the failure to comply
> with the ReST markups.

So I feel like I'm missing something here...

> Signed-off-by: Wang Wenhu <wenhu.wang@xxxxxxxx>
> ---
> v2: resend for the failure of delivering.
> 
>  .../translations/zh_CN/io_ordering.txt        | 72 ++++++++++++-------
>  1 file changed, 46 insertions(+), 26 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/Documentation/translations/zh_CN/io_ordering.txt b/Documentation/translations/zh_CN/io_ordering.txt
> index 1f8127bdd415..080ed2911db0 100644
> --- a/Documentation/translations/zh_CN/io_ordering.txt
> +++ b/Documentation/translations/zh_CN/io_ordering.txt
> @@ -29,39 +29,59 @@ Documentation/io_ordering.txt 的中文翻译
>  这也可以保证后面的写操作只在前面的写操作之后到达设备(这非常类似于内存
>  屏障操作,mb(),不过仅适用于I/O)。
>  
> +A more concrete example from a hypothetical device driver::
> +
> +		...
> +	CPU A:  spin_lock_irqsave(&dev_lock, flags)
> +	CPU A:  val = readl(my_status);
> +	CPU A:  ...
> +	CPU A:  writel(newval, ring_ptr);
> +	CPU A:  spin_unlock_irqrestore(&dev_lock, flags)
> +		...
> +	CPU B:  spin_lock_irqsave(&dev_lock, flags)
> +	CPU B:  val = readl(my_status);
> +	CPU B:  ...
> +	CPU B:  writel(newval2, ring_ptr);
> +	CPU B:  spin_unlock_irqrestore(&dev_lock, flags)
> +		...
> +
> +
>  假设一个设备驱动程的具体例子:
> +::
>  
> +		...
> +	CPU A:  spin_lock_irqsave(&dev_lock, flags)
> +	CPU A:  val = readl(my_status);
> +	CPU A:  ...
> +	CPU A:  writel(newval, ring_ptr);
> +	CPU A:  spin_unlock_irqrestore(&dev_lock, flags)
> +		...
> +	CPU B:  spin_lock_irqsave(&dev_lock, flags)
> +	CPU B:  val = readl(my_status);
> +	CPU B:  ...
> +	CPU B:  writel(newval2, ring_ptr);
> +	CPU B:  spin_unlock_irqrestore(&dev_lock, flags)

It sure looks like you're adding the same text twice here...?

Thanks,

jon




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