On 8/15/19 3:31 PM, Greg Kroah-Hartman wrote: > On Thu, Aug 15, 2019 at 03:12:34PM -0700, Randy Dunlap wrote: >> On 8/15/19 2:20 PM, Greg Kroah-Hartman wrote: >>>>> +The hardware security team will provide a per incident specific encrypted >>>> s/per incident specific/incident-specific/ >>> Fixed. And changed /a/ to /an/ >> >> eh? still should be /a per incident/ > > The sentence was changed to: > The hardware security team will provide an incident-specific > encrypted... > > is not "an" correct here? That's good then. I didn't see the complete sentence. -- ~Randy
