On 06/04/2018 05:22 AM, Mike Rapoport wrote:
> Hi Randy,
>
> Thanks for the review! I always have trouble with articles :)
> The patch below addresses most of your comments.
>
> On Fri, Jun 01, 2018 at 05:09:38PM -0700, Randy Dunlap wrote:
>> On 05/29/2018 04:37 AM, Mike Rapoport wrote:
>>> Hi,
>>>
>>> From 2d3ec7ea101a66b1535d5bec4acfc1e0f737fd53 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
>>> From: Mike Rapoport <rppt@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
>>> Date: Tue, 29 May 2018 14:12:39 +0300
>>> Subject: [PATCH] docs/admin-guide/mm: add high level concepts overview
>>>
>>> The are terms that seem obvious to the mm developers, but may be somewhat
>
> Huh, I afraid it's to late to change the commit message :(
Sure.
>> There are [or: These are]
>>
>>> obscure for, say, less involved readers.
>>>
>>> The concepts overview can be seen as an "extended glossary" that introduces
>>> such terms to the readers of the kernel documentation.
>>>
>>> Signed-off-by: Mike Rapoport <rppt@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
>>> ---
>>> Documentation/admin-guide/mm/concepts.rst | 222 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
>>> Documentation/admin-guide/mm/index.rst | 5 +
>>> 2 files changed, 227 insertions(+)
>>> create mode 100644 Documentation/admin-guide/mm/concepts.rst
>>>
>>> diff --git a/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/concepts.rst b/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/concepts.rst
>>> new file mode 100644
>>> index 0000000..291699c
>>> --- /dev/null
>>> +++ b/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/concepts.rst
>
> [...]
>
>>> +All this makes dealing directly with physical memory quite complex and
>>> +to avoid this complexity a concept of virtual memory was developed.
>>> +
>>> +The virtual memory abstracts the details of physical memory from the
>>
>> virtual memory {system, implementation} abstracts
>>
>>> +application software, allows to keep only needed information in the
>>
>> software, allowing the VM to keep only needed information in the
>>
>>> +physical memory (demand paging) and provides a mechanism for the
>>> +protection and controlled sharing of data between processes.
>>> +
>
> My intention was "virtual memory concept allows ... and provides ..."
> I didn't want to repeat "concept", to I've just omitted it.
>
> Somehow, I don't feel that "system" or "implementation" fit here...
OK. Thanks for the update.
> Subject: [PATCH] docs/admin-guide/mm/concepts.rst: grammar fixups
> The patch is mostly about adding 'a' and 'the' and updating indentation.
I would say that it's mostly about improving readability.
Acked-by: Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
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