Re: [PATCH v8 1/2] Documentation: kdump: remind user of nr_cpus

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On 08/17/16 at 07:36pm, Joe Perches wrote:
> On Thu, 2016-08-18 at 10:31 +0800, Zhou Wenjian wrote:
> > nr_cpus can help to save memory. So we should remind user of it.
> 
> trivia:
> > diff --git a/Documentation/kdump/kdump.txt b/Documentation/kdump/kdump.txt
> []
> > @@ -390,9 +390,11 @@ Notes on loading the dump-capture kernel:
> >  * Boot parameter "1" boots the dump-capture kernel into single-user
> >    mode without networking. If you want networking, use "3".
> >  
> > -* We generally don' have to bring up a SMP kernel just to capture the
> > +* We generally don' have to bring up an SMP kernel just to capture the
> 
> don't or do not
> 

Use do not is better, also need replace 'We' with 'You' to be
consistent with other part.
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