On Fri, Jul 8, 2016 at 7:13 PM, Ingo Molnar <mingo@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > * Byungchul Park <byungchul.park@xxxxxxx> wrote: > >> On Fri, Jul 08, 2016 at 07:50:39AM +0900, SeongJae Park wrote: >> > > I will add my opinion in korean. >> > >> > Thank you for kind and faithful review. I agree with most of your opinions and >> > suggestions. Most of your suggestions looks much better than mine. >> > >> > However, I also have some different opinion. I want to emphasize the fact that >> > (1) CPUs 'issue' memory operations to memory system as they want, (2) memory >> > system 'executes' those operations as they want, and (3) CPUs 'perceive' the >> > 'effects' of the operation executions as they want. I want to emphasize the >> > fact in document because I think most confusion about memory ordering comes >> > from vague understanding about the relation. To my perspective, few of your >> >> Right. I agree with you. > > Do these vague formulations exist in the English text as well? If yes then please > try to improve the English text first, then do the Korean translation. No, the vague formulations are just a roughly simplified summary of my thinking. That's why the formulations are so vague. Thanks, SeongJae Park > > Thanks, > > Ingo -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe linux-doc" in the body of a message to majordomo@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html