Re: [PATCH] vgaarbiter: documentation grammar correction

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Hi,

Just a gentle follow-up on this patch. It has been reviewed but hasn't
been applied yet.

Regards
Pranav Tyagi


On Thu, Feb 13, 2025 at 10:54 PM Pranav Tyagi <pranav.tyagi03@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
>
> Hi,
>
> Just a gentle follow-up on this patch. It has been reviewed by Bagas Sanjaya but hasn't been applied yet.
>
> Regards,
>
> Pranav Tyagi
>
>
> On Sat, Feb 8, 2025 at 8:36 AM Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
>>
>> On Fri, Feb 07, 2025 at 10:23:25PM +0530, Pranav Tyagi wrote:
>> > Corrects the following grammatical issues in the VGA Arbiter documentation:
>> > - Fixes subject-verb agreement by changing "co-exists" to "co-exist"
>> > - Corrects pluralization by changing "server" to "servers"
>> > - Improves sentence structure for clarity
>> >
>>
>> +Cc: DRM folks.
>>
>> > Signed-off-by: Pranav Tyagi <pranav.tyagi03@xxxxxxxxx>
>> > ---
>> >  Documentation/gpu/vgaarbiter.rst | 6 +++---
>> >  1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
>> >
>> > diff --git a/Documentation/gpu/vgaarbiter.rst b/Documentation/gpu/vgaarbiter.rst
>> > index bde3c0afb059..d1e953712cc2 100644
>> > --- a/Documentation/gpu/vgaarbiter.rst
>> > +++ b/Documentation/gpu/vgaarbiter.rst
>> > @@ -11,9 +11,9 @@ Section 7, Legacy Devices.
>> >
>> >  The Resource Access Control (RAC) module inside the X server [0] existed for
>> >  the legacy VGA arbitration task (besides other bus management tasks) when more
>> > -than one legacy device co-exists on the same machine. But the problem happens
>> > +than one legacy device co-exist on the same machine. But the problem happens
>> >  when these devices are trying to be accessed by different userspace clients
>> > -(e.g. two server in parallel). Their address assignments conflict. Moreover,
>> > +(e.g. two servers in parallel). Their address assignments conflict. Moreover,
>> >  ideally, being a userspace application, it is not the role of the X server to
>> >  control bus resources. Therefore an arbitration scheme outside of the X server
>> >  is needed to control the sharing of these resources. This document introduces
>> > @@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ In-kernel interface
>> >  libpciaccess
>> >  ------------
>> >
>> > -To use the vga arbiter char device it was implemented an API inside the
>> > +To use the vga arbiter char device, an API was implemented inside the
>> >  libpciaccess library. One field was added to struct pci_device (each device
>> >  on the system)::
>> >
>>
>> The diff looks OK.
>>
>> Reviewed-by: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@xxxxxxxxx>
>>
>> --
>> An old man doll... just what I always wanted! - Clara





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