Re: Slight improvement in readability

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Vyshnav Ajith <puthen1977@xxxxxxxxx> writes:

> Removed few extra spaces and changed from "a" to "an ISP"
>
> Signed-off-by: Vyshnav Ajith <puthen1977@xxxxxxxxx>
> ---
>  Documentation/networking/eql.rst | 6 +++---
>  1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/Documentation/networking/eql.rst b/Documentation/networking/eql.rst
> index a628c4c81166..4f47121323c9 100644
> --- a/Documentation/networking/eql.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/networking/eql.rst
> @@ -23,9 +23,9 @@ EQL Driver: Serial IP Load Balancing HOWTO
>  
>    Which is worse? A huge fee for a 56K leased line or two phone lines?
>    It's probably the former.  If you find yourself craving more bandwidth,
> -  and have a ISP that is flexible, it is now possible to bind modems
> +  and have an ISP that is flexible, it is now possible to bind modems
>    together to work as one point-to-point link to increase your
> -  bandwidth.  All without having to have a special black box on either
> +  bandwidth. All without having to have a special black box on either

Grammar fixes are fine, but we have an explicit policy that certain
things are *not* typos and do not need fixing.  These include American
or British spellings and, to the point here, the number of spaces after
a period.  Please do not submit that kind of change.

Thanks,

jon




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