Re: [PATCH v16 net-next 23/23] Documentation/tcp: Add TCP-AO documentation

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To: Dmitry Safonov <dima@xxxxxxxxxx>, David Ahern <dsahern@xxxxxxxxxx>, "David S. Miller" <davem@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>, Eric Dumazet <edumazet@xxxxxxxxxx>, Jakub Kicinski <kuba@xxxxxxxxxx>, Jonathan Corbet <corbet@xxxxxxx>, Paolo Abeni <pabeni@xxxxxxxxxx>, linux-doc@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, netdev@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: Re: [PATCH v16 net-next 23/23] Documentation/tcp: Add TCP-AO documentation
From: Markus Elfring <Markus.Elfring@xxxxxx>
Date: Fri, 17 Nov 2023 14:07:47 +0100
Cc: LKML <linux-kernel@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>, Andy Lutomirski <luto@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>, Ard Biesheuvel <ardb@xxxxxxxxxx>, Bob Gilligan <gilligan@xxxxxxxxxx>, Dan Carpenter <error27@xxxxxxxxx>, David Laight <David.Laight@xxxxxxxxxx>, Dmitry Safonov <0x7f454c46@xxxxxxxxx>, Dominik Gaillardetz <dgaillar@xxxxxxxxx>, Donald Cassidy <dcassidy@xxxxxxxxxx>, Eric Biggers <ebiggers@xxxxxxxxxx>, "Eric W. Biederman" <ebiederm@xxxxxxxxxxxx>, Francesco Ruggeri <fruggeri05@xxxxxxxxx>, Francois Tetreault <ftetreau@xxxxxxxxx>, Herbert Xu <herbert@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>, Hideaki Yoshifuji <yoshfuji@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>, Ivan Delalande <colona@xxxxxxxxxx>, Leonard Crestez <cdleonard@xxxxxxxxx>, Mohammad Nassiri <mnassiri@xxxxxxxxx>, Salam Noureddine <noureddine@xxxxxxxxxx>, Simon Horman <horms@xxxxxxxxxx>
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> +++ b/Documentation/networking/tcp_ao.rst
> @@ -0,0 +1,444 @@
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> +                                          … failure. But sine keeping
…

I find this wording improvable.
How do you think about to use the word “since” here?

Regards,
Markus

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