On Sat, Aug 05, 2023 at 09:54:25AM +0200, Thorsten Leemhuis wrote: > [adding Sasha and Jon to the CC, seem I forget to do that on the cover > letter; sorry!] > > On 05.08.23 09:21, Thorsten Leemhuis wrote: > > When adding something to this document earlier I noticed that readers > > need to perform some back and forth to fully understand things; I also > > noticed a few other aspects that seemed somewhat odd for me with my > > background on writing and editing texts. > > > > Find attached a few patches to improve things. The first three are > > mainly moving text around to a structure which is somewhat clearer. They > > leave quite a few rough edges behind that are fixed in in the last patch > > of the series, which changes a few other changes as well; thx to the > > prep patches the diff should be relative straight-forward to understand. > > > > These patches are on-top of the following series that currently is in the > > driver-core-testing branch: > > https://lore.kernel.org/all/cover.1689056247.git.linux@xxxxxxxxxxxxx/ > > FWIW, in case anyone wonders how the text looks in the end, see: > > https://www.leemhuis.info/files/kernel/stable-rules/stable-kernel-rules.txt > > https://www.leemhuis.info/files/kernel/stable-rules/Everything%20you%20ever%20wanted%20to%20know%20about%20Linux%20-stable%20releases%20%e2%80%94%20The%20Linux%20Kernel%20documentation.html Looks very good, thanks! greg k-h
