On Mon, Jul 10, 2023 at 07:10:13PM +0200, Thorsten Leemhuis wrote: > Optimize the text flow to make things more straight forward to follow: > > * remove a subheading without real purpose > * after outlining the three options add a section that explains them in > more detail; move the "Following the submission" text that set in the > middle of this to a later place in the document > * a few small clarifications along the way All of this churn makes it really hard to determine what the end result is. Do you have a before/after result anywhere? Or maybe split this out into 3 different patches? thanks, greg k-h