Re: [PULL] DocBook/drm: Basic copyediting

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On Mon, 29 Aug 2011 20:32:52 -0000
Michael Witten <mfwitten@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:

> On Mon, 29 Aug 2011 20:21:26 -0000, Michael Witten wrote:
> 
> > Fistly, Jesse, your technical opinion is probably only necessary for:
> >
> >   [38] DocBook/drm: Refer to the domain-setting function as a
> >        device-specific ioctl
> >
> > The changes there may be erroneous. However, the rest of the patches are
> > essentially trivial, so you needn't bother with them unless it interests
> > you; of course, I've been told that the DRM documentation has grown quite
> > stale, so it would be great if you could [find somebody to] update it.
> 
> Specifically:
> 
>   diff --git a/Documentation/DocBook/drm.tmpl b/Documentation/DocBook/drm.tmpl
>   index ba20f9f..9ae328a 100644
>   --- a/Documentation/DocBook/drm.tmpl
>   +++ b/Documentation/DocBook/drm.tmpl
>   @@ -724,11 +724,11 @@ void intel_crt_init(struct drm_device *dev)
>    	has finished rendering to the object, then the object must be made
>    	coherent with the CPU's view
>    	of memory, usually involving GPU cache flushing of various kinds.
>   -	This core CPU&lt;-&gt;GPU coherency management is provided by the GEM
>   -	set domain function, which evaluates an object's current domain and
>   +	This core CPU&lt;-&gt;GPU coherency management is provided by a
>   +	device-specific ioctl, which evaluates an object's current domain and
>    	performs any necessary flushing or synchronization to put the object
>    	into the desired coherency domain (note that the object may be busy,
>   -	i.e. an active render target; in that case, the set domain function
>   +	i.e. an active render target; in that case, setting the domain
>    	blocks the client and waits for rendering to complete before
>    	performing any necessary flushing operations).
>          </para>

Yeah, looks fine.

Acked-by: Jesse Barnes <jbarnes@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>

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