[PATCH 04/25] Docs: kernel-hacking: grammar/wording

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Clarify the advice to use C string concatenation
macros with printk().

Signed-off-by: Michael Witten <mfwitten@xxxxxxxxx>
---
 Documentation/DocBook/kernel-hacking.tmpl |    8 ++++++--
 1 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/DocBook/kernel-hacking.tmpl b/Documentation/DocBook/kernel-hacking.tmpl
index 540ed45..8eacb6c 100644
--- a/Documentation/DocBook/kernel-hacking.tmpl
+++ b/Documentation/DocBook/kernel-hacking.tmpl
@@ -434,8 +434,12 @@
     and reporting errors, and can be used inside interrupt context,
     but use with caution: a machine which has its console flooded with
     printk messages is unusable.  It uses a format string mostly
-    compatible with ANSI C printf, and C string concatenation to give
-    it a first "priority" argument:
+    compatible with ANSI C printf.
    </para>
+
+   <para>
+    Provide a <firstterm>message priority level</firstterm> by using
+    predefined macros and C string concatenation:
+   </para>
 
    <programlisting>
-- 
1.7.0.94.gf7311

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