On Wed, Nov 08, 2017 at 10:34:38AM +0100, Ingo Molnar wrote: > > * Byungchul Park <byungchul.park@xxxxxxx> wrote: > > > I'm afraid the revision is not perfect yet. Of course, the document can > > have got much better english by others than me. > > > > But, > > > > I think I should enhance it as much as I can, before they can help it > > starting with a better one. > > > > In addition, I removed verboseness as much as possible. > > > > ----->8----- > > From c7795104ca6ac6dd9f7fd944aee23a2011a6d3a2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 > > From: Byungchul Park <byungchul.park@xxxxxxx> > > Date: Mon, 30 Oct 2017 14:51:26 +0900 > > Subject: [PATCH] locking/lockdep: Revise > > Documentation/locking/crossrelease.txt > > > > The document should've been written with a better readability. Revise it > > to enhance its readability. > > > > Signed-off-by: Byungchul Park <byungchul.park@xxxxxxx> > > --- > > Documentation/locking/crossrelease.txt | 388 +++++++++++++++------------------ > > Could you please run a spellchecker over this text? It's still full of typos and > various grammar mistakes... Sure.. I have to.. I will look for a way and use it. Thanks a lot. > Thanks, > > Ingo
