On Sat, 2014-11-15 at 13:53 +0100, Ralf Mardorf wrote: > On Sat, 15 Nov 2014 07:35:36 -0500 > Dave Phillips <dlphillips@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > this version is a second draft uploaded for > > this version is a second draft uploaded for comments > > Oops, I pushed the wrong key first, my apologies. > > Nice composition, odd playing, IMO the playing is to statically. Some > parts remind me of Zappa's "The Adventures of Greggery Peccary". I'm > still listening, didn't hear the whole piece yet. Until now, around 7 > minutes I like it. Ok, I'm short in time now, I would continue listening if I would have more time yet, but IMO some notes are played with to less emotions, very technically, less dynamic range. IMO still a nice composition, good audio quality too, but consider to play it again or ask a friend who is a good piano player, to play it for you. I dislike the way it's played. Just a subjective opinion ;). Regards, Ralf PS: I need to stop at around 20 minutes, but it's hard to do it. Compliment :). Wow, at 19:19 there's a very nice part :). _______________________________________________ Linux-audio-user mailing list Linux-audio-user@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx http://lists.linuxaudio.org/listinfo/linux-audio-user
