I like this, I hadn't listened to the earlier mix(es) but where you are is quite nice. My only issues with the mix decisions: the drums are too dry, particularly the snare, relative to the vocals; I would either put more reverb on the drums, less on the vocal, or both :). Also, I would like to hear more of the harmony vocal in the later verses -- it is quite buried. Regarding the distortion on the vocal, I can definitely hear what you are talking about, especially later in the song. Just because you are not clipping doesn't mean you aren't recording too hot. What was your "working level" at the DAW input for recording? What was gain staging like throughout the signal chain between the microphone and the DAW? What effects do you have applied to the track? With modern equipment at 24-bit resolution and a good noise floor, "best practice" seems to be to work at about -20 dBFS RMS until mastering. If you are following "tape" conventions and trying to keep levels in the -6 dBFS range with peaks hitting near clipping, you may be working outside the best-performing range of your audio IO gear and introducing some distortion. As a side note, I think that DAW design encourages too-hot levels by use of waveform displays everywhere. If you are at a good level of -20 dBFS, your signal is at about 1/10 of the full range, which is hardly visible on a DAW waveform display if it's small. "I can't see the signal... turn it up!" -6 dBFS gets up to half the amplitude range, and if you are "seeing" waveforms near the full range of the wave display, you are somewhere around -1 dBFS, which is .89 of total range... way too high for working levels! Good work on the piece, and thanks for sharing it! Thanks, Bill Gribble On Thu, 2013-05-02 at 19:01 +0100, James Stone wrote: > Thanks everyone! > > This is my "improved" mix - based on comments here, and some more > tweaking! Not sure my skills are up to all the suggestions that were > made, but this is to the best of my ability: > > https://soundcloud.com/jmstone/m/download/s-SIyAE > > By the way, I am not sure if my condenser mic is breaking - the vocals > sound a bit distorted despite being recorded at below clipping levels > - any experts here care to comment? > > My friend is very happy with it, and is planning to submit it to a > local Nepali radio station in the UK - so we will see what comes of > it. > > No plans to record an album or anything - the guitar/bass player is > back in Nepal now.. > > Incidentally, the two of them were relatively famous in the 90s in > Nepal with a song they recorded together, but apparently no recordings > of it are left (they were recorded onto cassette and distributed to > radio stations, but never released).. > > James > > On Thu, May 2, 2013 at 5:48 PM, Set Hallstrom <sakrecoer@xxxxxxxxx> > wrote: > Very cosy music! > > I'd like to advise you to follow Q's advice, but make an > exception on > the snare+bassdrum and the bassguitar. > > I think the vocal level is good, but perhaps i would think > different if > i understood what he says (beautyfull language btw) > > Thanks for the music! Feel free to ad my email to any release > anouncment > list. > > *Set > > On 2013-05-01 23:36, Q wrote: > > Probably a bit of everything -- might be as easy to do it on > the master > > bus. > > > > Q > > > > On 01/05/13 22:32, James Stone wrote: > >> Thanks for listening, and thanks for the comments.. I will > continue > >> tweaking :) > >> > >> What were you thinking I could cut low-mids from? > >> > >> James > >> > >> On Wed, May 1, 2013 at 8:20 PM, Q <lists@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > >> <mailto:lists@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>> wrote: > >> > >> On 01/05/13 09:27, James Stone wrote: > >> > >> HI Everyone, > >> > >> Here is a song I recorded with a friend of mine who > is a Nepalese > >> singer, and one of his friends who played the > guitar and bass > >> on the > >> track. It has taken me ages to get round to > finishing it, > >> because I was > >> having real troubles coming up with some drums that > fitted the > >> song OK. > >> > >> This is the current version, mixed in Mixbus. I > would > >> appreciate any > >> thoughts on the song, and also the mix. > >> > >> > https://soundcloud.com/__jmstone/roughmix2/download/s-__qgo8P > >> > <https://soundcloud.com/jmstone/roughmix2/download/s-qgo8P> > >> > >> James > >> > >> > >> Hi > >> > >> Just had a listen to this and it sounds pretty nice as > it stands. > >> > >> You could probably clear out the low mids a little to > improve > >> clarity, but don't overdo it or you'll lose too much > warmth. > >> > >> The vocal drops in and out a bit, especially early on > (I think it's > >> probably the lower register bits that are most > affected). I guess > >> it'd probably be better to automate the volume rather > than compress, > >> although some light compression mightn't go astray. The > guitar has a > >> tendency to overpower the vocal as well, but it might > be okay once > >> the vocal level is higher, but if not, maybe EQ the > guitar a bit to > >> reduce the clash. > >> > >> The main guitar solo (from 3.10) needs to be more > upfront I'd say, > >> lose a lot of the reverb and it'd be a lot better. > Perhaps use some > >> delay to make it big without pushing it into the > background like the > >> reverb's doing. It's a bit thin sounding as well and > the level a bit > >> inconsistent. > >> > >> It's a pleasant sounding piece, nice and mellow. Nice > playing and > >> the singer's got a good voice. However, with not being > able to infer > >> any emotional intensity from the vocals, it all sounds > a bit flat, > >> on the same level -- the piece could do with some > contour to it, a > >> sense of building and releasing in the music. > >> > >> > >> Q > >> > > _______________________________________________ > > Linux-audio-user mailing list > > Linux-audio-user@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > http://lists.linuxaudio.org/listinfo/linux-audio-user > _______________________________________________ > Linux-audio-user mailing list > Linux-audio-user@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > http://lists.linuxaudio.org/listinfo/linux-audio-user > > > _______________________________________________ > Linux-audio-user mailing list > Linux-audio-user@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > http://lists.linuxaudio.org/listinfo/linux-audio-user _______________________________________________ Linux-audio-user mailing list Linux-audio-user@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx http://lists.linuxaudio.org/listinfo/linux-audio-user
