Hello Loki!
I do like coming in to get you very much. I think it doesn't anything else.
Of course you could do a full arrangment and it still wouldn't hurt, but also
is complete in the current version. Nice singer, exactly teh right voice for
this kind of music! Beautifully done!
The second tune: Well the guitar is a bit detuned, but that doesn't hurt too
much. :-) I think one way, you can improve your vocals, is trust in yoursle.f
Everyone can sing, it's onlyfinding the right notes, that can be the problem.
But even if you miss one, like I so often do :-), I found that it pays to sing
with more conviction. Do try, I think your voice can do that and you can do it
with your voice, you're a musician after all.
Sorry, nothing much in the way of constructive criticism, but what can I do,
if I like the pieces?
Kindest regards
Julien
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