Hi, Julien! Many thanks for opinion. What kind of solo sound You visualize in this piece? Can You provide info about similar band/song? About drums -- thanks, I should think over your proposals. Drums was made in Hydrogen, so any changes is possible :) Thank you once more for good words about my work. 2009/11/1 Julien Claassen <julien@xxxxxxxx>: > Hello Oleg! > Thanks for sharing this tune. For my taste there's enough change in it, of > course some vocals or another, a different solo sound/style would't have > heard, but that's just it: taste. > When it comes to sound: I like the recorder there, some time, since I've > worked with one. But I don't know, especially soprano recorders are dificult > to please. Perhaps some chorus (carefully and softly), a bit more reverb > perhaps. Even better, a second recorder. I was once told, to record a > recorder farther away from the microphone. > It would also have been nice, if the drums would change, especially when > you go back to the tonica, at the end of the melody. I imagined something > like bassdrum and the crash cymbal only on each new chord, just before the > tonica, perhaps some hihats in between or toms. But clearly a break. It > would have made a nice break there and signalled a new part. It would have > been a bit of the (un)expected and new there. > As a drum lover I'd again say: perhaps try te combination of reverb and > after the reverb a compressor on the snare. do you get the snaredrum on a > jack-port of it's own? If so, you might try some experiments with that, if > you do some electric guitar, heavier sound again. The snare gets bigger that > way, a bit more forcefull. > I do like your performance, don't see a hitch there. Nothing, that would > have been disturbing. I'm not that much into mastering, so I keep out of > that. I think it might somehow have sounded a bit stronger, more clearly > defined. But from personal experience with our band, I know, that this takes > loads of trial and error. I wouldn't know myself, how to get it right. > All in all: a good piece! Would be good to hear more from you. > Kindest regards > Julien > > -------- > Music was my first love and it will be my last (John Miles) > > ======== FIND MY WEB-PROJECT AT: ======== > http://ltsb.sourceforge.net > the Linux TextBased Studio guide > ======= AND MY PERSONAL PAGES AT: ======= > http://www.juliencoder.de > -- Truly yours, Oleg Ivanenko aka Ash [if it wasn't so sad, it would be funny] _______________________________________________ Linux-audio-user mailing list Linux-audio-user@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx http://lists.linuxaudio.org/mailman/listinfo/linux-audio-user
