On Sat, 2009-08-29 at 22:11 -0700, Llewellyn Beasley wrote: > The guitars are played by me and recorded in Ardour, the vocals are > mine but I sampled them and triggered them using Specimen and my > keyboard, I played all the synths which are mostly VSTs but there is > some ZynAddSubFX in there too. All the midi was recorded into > Rosegarden and the drums are Addictive Drums again triggered by my > keyboard. Very interested in hearing comments and such. > > http://www.slavetothesun.com/drupal/sites/default/files/08%20-%20Slave > %20To%20The%20Sun%20-%20Untitled_0.mp3 There are vocals in there? :) I would play with the 2 identical guitar notes at the end of bars, leaving one out each second iteration, or something like that. Drums seem to be very late on 2 and 4. I would shorten the whole piece (taking from each part, to not change the overall arrangement). It's nice stuff, but seems a bit stretched out to me. -- Thorsten Wilms thorwil's design for free software: http://thorwil.wordpress.com/ _______________________________________________ Linux-audio-user mailing list Linux-audio-user@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx http://lists.linuxaudio.org/mailman/listinfo/linux-audio-user