Hey Loki! Thanks a ton and a half for your feedback. May I follow up? Drums: Please chose the approach from below to make the drums more interesting that seems more likely to be effective to you: 1) Invest a lot in improving the drum timbre, and play with the pattern a little. 2) Invest little or no time improving the timbre, and focus on getting a more interesting pattern, more variations, and a better performance. Bass: Do you have an example or a different description of what you mean with: "round wound strings"? Thanks again! Pure value. Carlo PS: Comments from others to above questions very welcome too Loki Davison wrote: > On Mon, Aug 17, 2009 at 10:25 AM, Carlo > Capocasa<theman@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: >> Hi everyone! >> >> This is the first verse of my debut song Live Creator. It will be the >> first in a long series to be released on my site as CC attribution. >> >> http://carlocapocasa.com >> >> Suggested comments: Does it groove? Are there any errors or >> imperfections that irritate you? Do you like it? Does the mix sound >> different from what you are used to on your audio system? Does positive >> emotion come across? >> >> Thank you so much in advance for your help! >> >> Carlo >> > > Hey Carlo, > > It does groove. The drums don't do it for me though. Louder and more > interesting would be great. Just grab cheap things to wack and some > drum sticks. Some of the jazz or funk hydrogen patterns from brian's > bedroom http://briansbedroom.org/ would probably work well too. I > human drummer, even on crappy drums grooves a whole lot more though. > I'm not a big fan of that bass tone. In that track i'd think of a > round wound strings and similar fast notes if you want to keep the > funk vibe or flats played with your thumb if you want a more soul > vibe. > > Loki _______________________________________________ Linux-audio-user mailing list Linux-audio-user@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx http://lists.linuxaudio.org/mailman/listinfo/linux-audio-user
