Dave Phillips wrote: > Hi James, > > I'm no critic of the style, but I enjoyed the song. Some > comments/suggestions: > > The voice placement and presence are fine. New recordists tend to > undermix their vocals when they should be more up-front, but I like > where the voice is in this mix. > > The drums are under-recorded. The part is fine, but it should either > have a different sound (i.e. a different kit) or more presence in the > mix. Or both. > > Bass could use a wee bit more presence. > > I like the lyrics. :) > Great! I spent all of 5 minutes coming up with them!! :) They are supposed to be quite inane... but I like that! :) > A little dirtier sound might be appropriate for the style, but I'm not > sure how you'd achieve that effect. > > HTH, > Just uploaded a new version called "Red" (mixed based on your suggestions and mastered with jamin).. Maybe overdid the volume tho.. http://drop.io/your_clothes_are_red James _______________________________________________ Linux-audio-user mailing list Linux-audio-user@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx http://lists.linuxaudio.org/mailman/listinfo/linux-audio-user
