On Wed, Nov 01, 2006 at 10:56:45PM +0000, Folderol wrote: > Well, I just knew I would still be dissatisfied with this, so I've > tried again. > > One day I'll get it right - but probably only for one day :( > > Actually I've changed the voices quite a bit this time, and sort of > rediscovered harmonies that had got lost. > > Here is the (n)th version. > > (I don't know. I've lost count) > > http://www.musically.me.uk/music/Sad_Angel.ogg Sheesh, you really make one want to download this ... ;) This piece makes me expect movements like I know from church music, but they just don't happen. Should come down to some inbetween-notes. Being rather ignorant in that area, I wouldn't know how to be more specific. Keeping to a specific style, fullfilling cliches ... not necessarily a good thing, but in this case it would be quite fitting, I think. -- Thorsten Wilms
