On Sunday 21 May 2006 22:34, Q was like: > Hi everyone > > *gulp* Here goes... > > Finally everyone is happy with this. It's a prog(ish) rock instrumental > called "Laetoli (a fragment of a track)". > > Ogg-5 (6.47 MB) > http://www.spitfireq.f2s.com/music/Laetoli_%28a_fragment_of_a_track%29_ogg5 >.ogg > > Ogg-10 (18.6 MB) > http://www.spitfireq.f2s.com/music/Laetoli_%28a_fragment_of_a_track%29.ogg > > Flac (35.4 MB) > http://www.spitfireq.f2s.com/music/Laetoli_%28a_fragment_of_a_track%29.flac > > > Two or three of the wavs were recorded under Windows, shortly before I > discovered DeMuDi. Everything else has been recorded, mixed etc under > Linux. > > It was, perhaps, not the easiest choice for the first piece to record – > it's been a steep learning curve, not only making the transition from > Windows to Linux but also learning music software and DAW recording from > scratch. It has been fun though and made easier by all the useful > information and help and advice on the lists and elsewhere. It might > have been finished sooner had the guitarist not bought a new axe partway > through and insisted on re-recording a load of parts ;-) > > Hope you like it, feedback welcome. I finally got round to listening to this. Very nice. I agree that the Bass is the weakness in this track, but my reasoning is different. Personally I would like to hear a much more driving bass and I think it needs a few 'rushes' to build it, possibly in the drum parts, but there are other ways of doing this. If you feel the piece is finished, I would leave it there and simply bear in mind these comments for future pieces. I'm not a great fan of over-production. -- cheers, tim hall http://glastonburymusic.org.uk/tim We are the people We've been waiting for.